Score: 4

"Some good work."

submission: Toonimated Shorts

date: February 27, 2007

Some good Work, in places the animation could have used a little caressing. But overall, good work. The Music in the Fly Shorts was well done, though not my style, well done technically.

Score: 3

"Funny, but..."

submission: A history of Emo's Pt2

date: February 8, 2007

I notice in your credits you warn [under threat of death] against stealing your charcaters. But what about the Music that you "appropriated" without permision from the artists? Don't you think that T.M.B.G would also like it if you didn't steal their work?

Just a thought. I realize you arent making any money from this so you consider it harmless, but thats noot exactly how copyrights work.

Good luck and keep up the [good] work.

Score: 5

"I counted 4 tones..."

submission: Twotone warfare

date: February 8, 2007

Pretty Good, music was dull. Nice job with screen direction. Good Message, War is bad.

Score: 4

"Great job on the graphics and sound"

submission: M&S: Enemies Because...

date: February 1, 2007

Very authentic to the Original games, and kind of funny, but really very slow, I could barely sit through the whole the thing, by act II I was kinda bored. Nice job on the graphics though.

Score: 7

"Very nice"

submission: little frog

date: February 1, 2007

Love the whole thing, nice character design, and great music and timing. Good work.

Ed Anderson
CEO
Mongadillo Studios Animation

Score: 4

"Kinda Funny"

submission: "Feeding Park Fun"

date: February 1, 2007

I liked the music, the main character was interesting, the vomit was funny. I especially appreciated the 1 beat pause between the first round of vomiting and the second.
I also liked the look of the scratched film "filter" and the B&W, it went well with the musical style to give the cartoon a vintage appeal.

Nice job

Score: 3

"Getting there..."

submission: Zelda: link and cuccos

date: February 1, 2007

I would suggest you spend a little more time on your graphics, especially your close-ups and your character assets that you plan to reuse a lot. Sound will defintely help. I also think your story is missing something, actually two things, it has a beginning, but need s a middle and an ending. Do a little more work there too.

Good Luck

Score: 3

"Timing timing timing"

submission: Brentford Bob - Bus

date: February 1, 2007

The timing needs a little work. The prmise is a little simplistic, one dimensional, but good effort. I do think you're violating copyright law by using that music.

Score: 4

"Kinda Funny"

submission: The Chill Pill

date: January 31, 2007

Good Job, saw your reflection in the window.

Score: 5

"NiNice Looking, but wheres the story?"

submission: the YuYu

date: January 29, 2007

Very nicely done Flash Animation, nice animation in general really. But lacking in substance as far as the story is concerned. A one dimensional concept, beautifully executed.