Some good work.
Some good Work, in places the animation could have used a little caressing. But overall, good work. The Music in the Fly Shorts was well done, though not my style, well done technically.
I notice in your credits you warn [under threat of death] against stealing your charcaters. But what about the Music that you "appropriated" without permision from the artists? Don't you think that T.M.B.G would also like it if you didn't steal their work?
Just a thought. I realize you arent making any money from this so you consider it harmless, but thats noot exactly how copyrights work.
Good luck and keep up the [good] work.
If T.M.B.G want to assassinate me for using there song then there buisness
I counted 4 tones...
Pretty Good, music was dull. Nice job with screen direction. Good Message, War is bad.
3/4 reveiws have sed the music was a bit bad it was just the first think i found in the audio portal i liked , and yes war is bad
Great job on the graphics and sound
Very authentic to the Original games, and kind of funny, but really very slow, I could barely sit through the whole the thing, by act II I was kinda bored. Nice job on the graphics though.
Love the whole thing, nice character design, and great music and timing. Good work.
Mongadillo Studios Animation
I liked the music, the main character was interesting, the vomit was funny. I especially appreciated the 1 beat pause between the first round of vomiting and the second.
I also liked the look of the scratched film "filter" and the B&W, it went well with the musical style to give the cartoon a vintage appeal.
thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
I would suggest you spend a little more time on your graphics, especially your close-ups and your character assets that you plan to reuse a lot. Sound will defintely help. I also think your story is missing something, actually two things, it has a beginning, but need s a middle and an ending. Do a little more work there too.
ill try to put some more effort on the storyline. and of course improve the graphics
Timing timing timing
The timing needs a little work. The prmise is a little simplistic, one dimensional, but good effort. I do think you're violating copyright law by using that music.
This is part of a Project for school work... In the UK schools may use any media they like.
Good Job, saw your reflection in the window.
NiNice Looking, but wheres the story?
Very nicely done Flash Animation, nice animation in general really. But lacking in substance as far as the story is concerned. A one dimensional concept, beautifully executed.
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