Mongadillo-Animation's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A history of Emo's Pt2]

Funny, but...

I notice in your credits you warn [under threat of death] against stealing your charcaters. But what about the Music that you "appropriated" without permision from the artists? Don't you think that T.M.B.G would also like it if you didn't steal their work?

Just a thought. I realize you arent making any money from this so you consider it harmless, but thats noot exactly how copyrights work.

Good luck and keep up the [good] work.

Insaneplanetman responds:

If T.M.B.G want to assassinate me for using there song then there buisness

[Twotone warfare]

I counted 4 tones...

Pretty Good, music was dull. Nice job with screen direction. Good Message, War is bad.

boggles0 responds:

3/4 reveiws have sed the music was a bit bad it was just the first think i found in the audio portal i liked , and yes war is bad

["Feeding Park Fun"]

Kinda Funny

I liked the music, the main character was interesting, the vomit was funny. I especially appreciated the 1 beat pause between the first round of vomiting and the second.
I also liked the look of the scratched film "filter" and the B&W, it went well with the musical style to give the cartoon a vintage appeal.

Nice job

creativeinprogess responds:

thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

[Zelda: link and cuccos]

Getting there...

I would suggest you spend a little more time on your graphics, especially your close-ups and your character assets that you plan to reuse a lot. Sound will defintely help. I also think your story is missing something, actually two things, it has a beginning, but need s a middle and an ending. Do a little more work there too.

Good Luck

duperDude responds:

ill try to put some more effort on the storyline. and of course improve the graphics